How does a writer make a character feel real, and how do you show what a character is like and how the writer reveals it?
Explain how a writer builds character in prose (through actions, speech, description and what others say), and analyse what a character is like and how we are shown it
A clear, scaffolded answer to the N(A)-Level Literature skill of analysing characterisation in prose fiction. The ways a writer shows what a character is like (actions, speech, description, others' views), the show-not-tell idea, and how to write about character with evidence.
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What this dot point is asking
Characters are at the heart of most stories. This dot point asks two things: what is a character like, and how does the writer show it? You need to read for personality (the traits a character has) and for method (the ways the writer reveals those traits). A strong answer never just retells what a character does; it explains what each action, word or description tells us about the person.
The answer
The ways a writer reveals character
A writer can show what a character is like in several ways. Learn to look for all of them:
- Actions: what a character does (straightening pens, slamming a door) often reveals more than words.
- Speech: how a character talks (rude, gentle, boastful) and what they choose to say.
- Description: how a character looks and how the writer describes them (the words chosen carry feelings).
- What others say and do: the way other characters react to someone tells us about them.
- Thoughts: in some stories we are let inside a character's mind.
Show, not tell
Good writers usually "show" character through behaviour rather than "telling" us a trait directly. Instead of "he was mean", a writer might show him refusing to help a child. Showing is more convincing because the reader works out the trait from the evidence. When you analyse, your job is to do that working-out and explain it.
Round and flat, and how characters change
Some characters are detailed and lifelike (round); others are simple and serve one purpose (flat). It is also worth noticing whether a character changes across a story. A character who learns or grows is more interesting to write about, so if you can show a change (from selfish to caring, say), that is a strong point.
Examples in context
Example 1. Character through speech. A character who says "I suppose I could help, if it's really that important to you" reveals reluctance and a hint of self-importance, without the writer stating it. Analysing the way a line of dialogue is phrased, not just what it means, is a strong characterisation move.
Example 2. Character through others' reactions. In Charles Dickens's public-domain novel "A Christmas Carol", we learn how cold Scrooge is partly from how people shrink away from him in the street. The reactions of others build our sense of a character, so notice how the people around someone behave toward them.
Try this
Q1. Name three methods a writer can use to reveal a character. [2 marks]
- Cue. Any three of: the character's actions, their speech, the description of them, their thoughts, and the reactions of other characters.
Q2. What does "show, do not tell" mean? [2 marks]
- Cue. It means revealing a trait through behaviour (showing a kind act) rather than stating it ("she was kind"), because evidence convinces the reader.
Q3. What three things should every point about a character include? [3 marks]
- Cue. A trait (anxious, kind), the method that shows it (an action, a line of speech), and a short quotation as evidence.
Exam-style practice questions
Practice questions written in the style of SEAB exam questions on this dot point, with worked answer explainers. The year tag is the paper they imitate, not the source.
Original12 marksRead this original passage, written for this question: "Mr Tan straightened the pens on his desk until each one pointed the same way. He checked the door was locked, then checked it again. When the new clerk said good morning, he only nodded, his eyes still on the pens." How does the writer present Mr Tan's character? Support your answer with details.Show worked answer →
Model answer: The writer shows Mr Tan as a fussy, controlled and unfriendly man, without ever stating it directly. His action of straightening the pens "until each one pointed the same way" shows he likes everything in order and is perhaps anxious. Checking the locked door "then checked it again" suggests he is nervous or distrustful. When the clerk greets him, he "only nodded, his eyes still on the pens", which shows he is cold and more interested in his desk than in people. The writer uses small actions to reveal his personality, letting the reader judge him.
What markers reward: identifying character traits (fussy, anxious, cold) and proving each one with a specific action from the passage. The best answers notice that the writer shows rather than tells, and quote the small actions.
Original8 marksExplain what 'show, do not tell' means in characterisation, with an example.Show worked answer →
Model answer: "Show, do not tell" means a writer reveals what a character is like through their actions, speech and behaviour, instead of just stating it. For example, instead of writing "she was kind", a writer might show her giving up her seat for a stranger and carrying their bags. Showing is more powerful because the reader works out the trait themselves and believes it, rather than just being told.
What markers reward: a clear explanation of the idea, a good example contrasting telling ("she was kind") with showing (a kind action), and the reason showing works better (the reader is convinced by evidence).
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